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Chazz Michael Michaels couldn’t remember the last time he’d set foot in a church. He knew why- The stained glass windows dimmed the sunlight as it came through, casting shadows of saints’ faces on the floor. The smell of old people hung in the air, along with the smells of wine and incense. He also couldn’t remember the last time he’d worn a tuxedo, and it itched.

The aisle from the back of the church to the front was the longest walk Chazz had ever taken. The pews seemed to stretch on and on until he finally reached the altar. Stepping up onto the stage-like setting, the brunette peered down into the open casket.

James MacElroy had never looked as peaceful as he did in that wooden box; His face was serene, his arms crossed over his chest, his blonde curls perfectly arranged around his head.

But his lips were blue, almost as blue as his eyes had been; a light, pale blue that made Chazz think of an evening sky preceding a storm.

Jimmy’s former skating partner choked as he suddenly found it difficult to breathe. Chazz found his feet stuck to the floor, glued there by the shock of his deceased friend. He broke out into a cold sweat, the perspiration sticking to the undersides of his arms.

Finally, Chazz found the strength to tear his eyes away from the shell that once held Jimmy’s youthful soul. He walked briskly down the steps, past the pews, and through the front doors, where he promptly vomited onto the beautiful azalea bushes.
©2007-2010 ~AphoticCrow
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Author's Comments

Blades of Glory drabble, just to get my hands wet. 262 words, Chazz/Jimmy if you want it to be, character death.

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:iconveevega:
man if you're gonna do character death NEEDS LESS CRYING MORE GORE though the vomit was a sexy touch. F PLUS


i liked it. heaartsssss

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Ha ha- I get it! They's homos!
:iconaphoticcrow:
You passed. BARELY.

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"Yesterday was my birthday. I won't tell you which, because I hate you." - Stephen Fry

CURRENT OBESSIONS- Stephen Fry and Hugh Laurie.

NOT ALL MEN ARE BISHIES
:iconashsashsalfaldwn:
I've already told you my critique...

And yeah, I know the reason that Chazz's reaction was so realistic. It's great that you were able to write this, because honestly? I don't think I could.

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You can think I'm wrong, but that doesn't mean you should quit thinking.

Hey, I can be a jerk to people I haven't slept with. I am that good.
:iconaphoticcrow:
One of those.. getting-out-your-demons thing.

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"Yesterday was my birthday. I won't tell you which, because I hate you." - Stephen Fry

CURRENT OBESSIONS- Stephen Fry and Hugh Laurie.

NOT ALL MEN ARE BISHIES
:iconimtheoriginallestat:
O_O YOU... EVIL IMPURE!!! How could you???

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They say the best weapon is one you never have to fire,
I prefer the weapon you only need to fire once.


Let's face it,
this is not the worst thing you've ever caught me doing.
-Tony Stark
:iconaphoticcrow:
Because this is a natural part of life and is going to happen?

I'd love if you had some concrit for me instead of just quoting the movie at me. I've written happy/slashy things in the past and I thought this would be a good chance for me to go outside of that, not to mention it was helping me excorsize my own demons.

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"Yesterday was my birthday. I won't tell you which, because I hate you." - Stephen Fry

CURRENT OBESSIONS- Stephen Fry and Hugh Laurie.

NOT ALL MEN ARE BISHIES
:iconimtheoriginallestat:
Hey hey calm down ok?? I actualy DON'T like seeing death people that might be happy or... I don't know. It was just... NOOOOT right.

--
They say the best weapon is one you never have to fire,
I prefer the weapon you only need to fire once.


Let's face it,
this is not the worst thing you've ever caught me doing.
-Tony Stark
:iconaphoticcrow:
First off, I am incredibly calm. Second off, people do die. It's going to happen. Jimmy MacElroy, in his universe, is going to die and there's no way that that's "not right". Now, I do understand that it's a sad thing, but you didn't have to read it.

Now, with that out of the way- Do you have concrit for me? Some way for me to improve my writing?

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"Yesterday was my birthday. I won't tell you which, because I hate you." - Stephen Fry

CURRENT OBESSIONS- Stephen Fry and Hugh Laurie.

NOT ALL MEN ARE BISHIES
:iconimtheoriginallestat:
u_u You are a great writter, actualy you are.

--
They say the best weapon is one you never have to fire,
I prefer the weapon you only need to fire once.


Let's face it,
this is not the worst thing you've ever caught me doing.
-Tony Stark

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